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 Post subject: The mystery of Atromidia
PostPosted: 08 Sep 2009, 15:52 
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3. Sentences must be close to the main idea of the developing Novel.

And here is the beginning of the novel named "The mystery of Atromidia":

Have you ever heard about places which haven't been discovered yet? Atromidia is a place like that. Life in Atromidia goes on in a very ordinary way, but they say there's something special -- mysterious about this place.

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"The mystery of Atromidia"

Have you ever heard about places which haven't been discovered yet? Atromidia is a place like that. Life in Atromidia goes on in a very ordinary way, but they say there's something special -- mysterious about this place. People living here are like the others who live all over the world. No special ability, no special feature distinguishing them from an ordinary human. But then you can ask what's so different about this place that makes it mysterious?

There is only one difference. Atromidia is an isolated country, nobody knows about this country, except Atromidia inhabitants. Atromidia is situated on a one small island which is situated in the center of the Mediterranean Sea. Atromidia inhabitants know about the whole world surrounding them, they go out, visit countries around, but they never show the way back. They travel at nights, so that way they keep their secret place undiscovered. People living in the countries bordering with Mediterranean Sea can't even imagine that they meet inhabitants of mysterious Atromidia. Keeping secret this island from the others is very difficult, but atromidians have strong traditions about this problem. Every atromidian has several foreign country passport (they make it in their island, so it is illegal), that's why to go anywhere is not problem for them. Of course Atromidia island seems easily from the air photos of Earth, but there are a lot of small islands -- neighbours to Atromidia, in which no human lives. Travellers had come to the neighbour islands several times, but none of them was interested with Atromidia, because atromidians could make Atromidia shores "uninteresting"

But why atromidians don't want their island to be discovered? What is the problem? Maybe they don't want their Big Secret to be exposed?... But as we know the Nature of things is such that nobody in this world ever gets anything for Nothing.

One day being tired of loneliness a pretty Atromidian girl called Hellita gets acquainted with a boy from Greece called Kostas by email and promises to bring him to her mysterious country. Kostas is very intelligent and curious, he's eager to visit Hellita's homecountry, though he is unaware of the punishment waiting for any outsider in Atromidia.


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People living here are like the others who live all over the world. No special ability, no special feature distinguishing them from an ordinary human. But then you can ask what's so different about this place that makes it mysterious?


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There is only one difference. Atromidia is an isolated country, nobody knows about this country, except Atromidia inhabitants. Atromidia is situated on a one small island which is situated in the center of the Mediterranean Sea.


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Atromidia inhabitants know about the whole world surrounding them, they go out, visit countries around, but they never show the way back. They travel at nights, so that way they keep their secret place undiscovered. People living in the countries bordering with Mediterranean Sea can't even imagine that they meet inhabitants of mysterious Atromidia.


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Keeping secret this island from the others is very difficult, but atromidians have strong traditions about this problem. Every atromidian has several foreign country passport (they make it in their island, so it is illegal), that's why to go anywhere is not problem for them. Of course Atromidia island seems easily from the air photos of Earth, but there are a lot of small islands -- neighbours to Atromidia, in which no human lives. Travellers had come to the neighbour islands several times, but none of them was interested with Atromidia, because atromidians could make Atromidia shores "uninteresting".


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But why atromidians don't want their island to be discovered? What is the problem? Maybe they don't want their Big Secret to be exposed?


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But as we know the Nature of things is such that nobody in this world ever gets anything for Nothing.
One day being tired of loneliness a pretty Atromidian girl called Hellita gets acquainted with a boy from Greece called Kostas by email and promises to bring him to her mysterious country. Kostas is very intelligent and curious, he's eager to visit Hellita's homecountry, though he is unaware of the punishment waiting for any outsider in Atromidia.


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 Post subject: Re: The mystery of Atromidia
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But Hellita doesn't want to warn Kostas about the danger waiting him in her country, because she is afraid that he won't come if he knows...

So, Hellita talks with Kostas, and they decide to meet in Cyprus, at night... But Hellita still thinks how to get there for bringing Kostas, she can't tell anyone but she can't go there alone either...


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Hellita at last decided to take with her one of her girl friends and they met in the midnight under one big tree. Her friend was being afraid so much and told to Hellita that she had to be at home before the sunrise, Hellita agreed with her. They took one boat and went to meet with Kostas.......


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